A Voyage to Abyssinia — Edition Insights
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Samuel Johnson's translation of Father Jerónimo Lobo's A Voyage to Abyssinia (1735) is a work where the translator's hand is never invisible. Johnson, then a young writer, renders Lobo's Portuguese original (via a French intermediary) into a crisp, Latinate English that often feels more like a neoclassical essay than a travel narrative. The prose is marked by balanced clauses, abstract nouns, and a preference for the general over the particular—a style that imposes order on the chaos of missionary travel. Yet within this formal frame, Johnson preserves moments of startling specificity: the taste of raw cow's flesh, the exact number of Portuguese soldiers, the precise wording of a defiant message to a Moorish general. This editorial note examines three authorial choices visible in the translation: Johnson's lexical register, his handling of dialogue and reported speech, and his treatment of cultural description.
Lexical Register and Latinate Diction
Johnson's vocabulary in A Voyage to Abyssinia is conspicuously elevated. He favors words of Latin origin—'omnipotence,' 'expedition,' 'intercourse'—even where simpler alternatives exist. This choice creates a tone of gravity and distance, as if the translator is mediating the raw experiences of a Jesuit missionary through the lens of Augustan refinement. For instance, when describing the Portuguese general's response to Mahomet, Johnson writes: 'he put his whole confidence in the omnipotence of God and the justice of his cause.' The abstraction 'omnipotence' and the balanced phrasing are hallmarks of Johnson's own prose style, not Lobo's likely more direct original. This lexical register has a dual effect: it dignifies the missionary enterprise while also distancing the reader from the visceral realities of the journey. The reader is constantly aware of a learned narrator shaping the account.
Dialogue and Reported Speech as Rhetorical Set-Pieces
Johnson renders direct speech in the narrative as formal, almost theatrical exchanges. The Portuguese general's reply to Mahomet is a prime example: 'That he and his fellow-soldiers were come with an intention to drive Mahomet out of these countries, which he had wrongfully usurped.' The syntax is periodic, the clauses balanced, and the tone defiant yet measured. This is not the spontaneous speech of a battlefield commander but a crafted oration. Johnson also includes a wry detail—the general's gift of 'a looking-glass and a pair of pincers'—which he reports without comment, letting the absurdity speak for itself. Such moments suggest Johnson's awareness of the comic potential in cultural confrontation. The reported speech throughout the text functions less as verbatim record and more as a rhetorical device to dramatize conflict and character.
Cultural Description and the Translator's Restraint
Johnson's treatment of cultural details reveals a tension between ethnographic curiosity and neoclassical reserve. He includes specific observations—the Abyssinian taste for raw cow's flesh, the difficulty of travel during winter, the numerical strength of armies—but often subordinates them to the narrative's moral and religious framework. For example, the description of the Portuguese soldiers as 'more desirous of glory than wealth' frames their actions within a chivalric code, rather than exploring the economic or social realities of the campaign. Johnson does not exoticize Abyssinia; instead, he domesticates it through his measured prose. The reader learns of strange customs through a familiar stylistic lens. This restraint is a deliberate authorial choice, reflecting Johnson's belief that the translator's task is to make the foreign intelligible, not to heighten its strangeness.
Narrative Structure and the Role of the Editor
The 1887 Cassell edition, from which this etext is prepared, includes an introduction by Henry Morley that frames Lobo's story within a biographical and historical context. Morley's editorial voice is distinct from Johnson's: he provides dates, names, and a clear chronological outline. This paratextual material shapes the reader's expectations, presenting the work as both a historical document and a tale of adventure. The narrative itself, however, follows a loose episodic structure, moving from Lobo's arrival in India to his missionary work in Abyssinia and his subsequent travels. Johnson's translation does not impose a strong narrative arc; instead, it allows events to unfold with a cumulative effect. The reader is left to infer connections between episodes, guided by Johnson's consistent stylistic tone rather than explicit commentary.
Readers approaching A Voyage to Abyssinia should attend to the interplay between Lobo's experiences and Johnson's shaping of them. The translation is not a transparent window onto 17th-century Ethiopia but a carefully constructed literary artifact. Noticing Johnson's lexical choices, his handling of dialogue, and his treatment of cultural detail will enrich the reading experience. This edition, with Morley's introduction, offers a useful entry point into a work that rewards attention to language as much as to narrative.
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